2D Animation Feedback

2D Animation Feedback

This is my 2D animation that I have made.

This is the Link to my Pallet Wall for you to leave your comments. 

http://padlet.com/djadam14/my2Danimation  



What is your own personal response to the animation you have 

been produced?

My own personal response to my animation is that I think that my animation is okay because the characters don't really move but it is still okay with out them moving. Also I think that the characters that I choose are good and I kept them theme of using PlayStation characters. Also I think the sound effects and the music that I used are good and fit with the animation.

What is your response to the feedback you have received? 

This is the first feedback that I got that was from Lewis. He thinks that my 2D animation is good. My response to his feedback is good and that I agree with his feedback.

The second feedback that I got was from Alex. He thought that my 2D animation is nice and he likes my ideas as well. My response to his feedback is good and that I agree with his feedback.  

The third feedback that I got was from Luke. He thought that my 2D animation is simple and could have been improved. My response to his feedback is good that I agree with his feedback.

The fourth and least feedback that I got was from Declan. He likes my 2D animation and likes the ideas that I used and gave it a 4/5. My response to his feedback is good and that I agree with his feedback.

Based on this level of response, how could you have improved your production?

Based on certain comments I could improve my 2D animation by doing some things. The first thing I could improve was said by Lewis and he said 'could of been better if you moved the characters more' So I could improve my 2D animation by moving my characters more for example I could move the characters at the being when the come out of their game boxes which is shown in the image below.

The next thing that I could improve was said by Alex and he said 'Although I though there could of been a clearer ending.' So I could improve my 2D animation by making the ending a lot more clear by having something going on in at the end which people would understand whats happening which is shown in the image below.

The last thing I could improve was said by Declan and he said 'i think the sound volumes were a little bit loud' So I could improve my 2D animation by make the sound that I used a bit more quieter.

Will you make these improvements to your production based on your feedback?

If I was to make my 2D animation again then I would do all the things that I would need to improve it that was said in my feedback but I won't make the improvements now because I don;t have enough time to make them.